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DO YOU REMEMBER- I REMEMBER

Do you remember?
I remember
I remember the way we used to be so close
flesh upon blood, blood upon skin
are hearts melted together, that in which made us kin
Do you remember that old house we used to have?
the one with the rusted old club house that we made
Do you remember when i couldnt get into our yard, so i cried
tears upon tears, a bounty a lot
and you were the only one, that gave a second thought
the bucket upon bucket fights of snow,
the way the cold winter wind did blow
Do you remember,
your face covered so white
as fluffy white snowflakes, came billowing down on you in one descend?
I remember.
but do you?
Now the years have passed by, mind you, and so you might forget
but i no something, i no something, you bet
you cant forget everything, for the past is your now
looking back at it all, we've come so far, its hard to begin
shh... i hear the wind..listen closely...
it says to me....
Do you remember?
I remember.
I remember the running,
the slapping of shoes against pavement as we walked through soak filled
streets of gravel
for once i felt...utterly free...with you by my side, we were left to be just
that....free
Do you remember those oh, so fond memories that ring ever so clear?
Do you remember it....do you remember...me..my dear?
of  course you dont, i can hardly remember myself
What have i become?
My soul lost to what has been done

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this was a poem/thought that crossed my mind as i was walking Lucky, my dog, in the pouring rain . I've always belived the deepest of thoughts came from the rain and standing under it, listening to its voices fill your ears as you try to contain yourself with the new knowlege you recieve. everything in this poem is accurate. these are vague memories of me and lucky, of everything, of small past references of what was to come. he is still alive, for all wondering
:star:100 THEMED CHALLENGE: MEMORY:star:
Lucky, you were the only one truly there for me during my hardship, and the strongest of both of us, now its my turn to be strong for both of us in the end.

thanks to :iconkidkizzet--1995: for helping me decide out of the two pix i had, which to use for this peice,
picture does NOT belong to me, just used for meshing and standing out more purposes

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*MooseFroos Jun 8, 2010  Student Digital Artist
LMFAO oh man I laughed at your artist comment about eh picture, good one :iconthumbsupplz:
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:iconx-xxnevermorexx-x:
This is really good. It has a depth that I can't really describe and also somehow it's sad. So far from what I've read, I love your work.=)
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:iconblackshady101:
thnx u. thats how exactly the mood i was trying to portray :) u understood
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:iconx-xxnevermorexx-x:
You are welcome. =)
Yay, I understood! ;p
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